2015考研英语真题大小作文命中对比解读

　　2015考研英语写作范文及真题命中对比解读

　　——命中英语一、英语二大小作文

　　新东方在线名师、上海新东方国内部总监、考研英语培训专家朱伟老师和汪中平老师直接命中考研英语一写作真题。他们共同提供了以下范文：

　　在新东方在线课程的《考研写作押题密训班》以及《2015考研英语作文考前预测20篇》(小黄书)中，朱伟老师的直接命中英语一大作文!

　　请对比押题密训课程讲义以及小黄书167页原文原图：“科技的发展给生活带来巨大改变”

　　关键词：太空游，网上购物利弊，科研学术造假，科技奴隶(kitchen rage， be addicted to the smart mobile phone)

　　可以看出，不同的仅是图画。实际完全相同。那么，对原文开头稍作调整就是一篇高分作文。

　　英语一大作文范文：

　　When the hot word of the year——“innovation”arouses wide concern from the public, can we still stand there, hesitating for what occurs? As we can see from the depiction, four youngsters, seemingly having a dinner, arein fact concentrated on their smart phones. Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that the topic concerning “high-tech burden” has been in the spotlightthat attracts attention from every corner of the world.

　　But my own worry today is less that of the overwhelming problem of electronic trashes than it is of the slightly more luxurious agony of the decline in communication even of well-educated youths. We scarcely write a handwritten letter other than an E-mail, which displays fewer touching emotions than the script, for example. Several factors could weigh heavily for this degeneration, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects. To begin with, as the economic boom brings not only the high standard of modernization but the fast rhythm of living as well, many citizens could hardly keep cool when facing the relentless competition.Disastrously, many choose to abandon themselves to so-called high-tech pleasure so that they can escape from reality for a while. Furthermore, externally, our society is witnessing an overwhelming number of innovative goods, ranging from Iphone5s to all-powerful TV remotes, which exaggerate this kind of nonsense to produce the over-worship toward “High-tech”. A recent survey reveals that one in three college students in China thinkshe is willing to spend RMB5880 buying an Iphonerather than study materials.

　　Fortunately, that is not the Day of Judgment. It is, undoubtedly, the very time that we should take some available methods to end these inappropriate behaviors, including laying down the effective regulations to modulate the orientation of scientific advancement, shaping a moderate science outlook and guaranteeing more rational lifestyles to the high-tech.

　　另外，这篇文章还可以按照朱伟老师的《最后三小时直播点题班》里的第34张PPT里的内容来写，内容非常接近：

　　如果把这篇文章从玩手机浪费时间的角度写也可以用到小黄书64页第一篇大作文

　　预测范文：

　　光阴的故事 (关键字：时间，生活方式，自我管理能力，电视节目低俗化)

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　　同样这道题，我们还曾经把它作为英语二的题目来预测。在这里我们也重点介绍了饼状图的写法。

　　今年英语二考的是饼状图，这也是我们今年的预测重点。

　　在朱伟老师新东方在线课程的写作高阶以及小黄书26页中我们介绍了饼状图的写法。

　　这套题和我们小黄书77页作为英语一预测的试题非常吻合。实际上朱老师一直强调英语一和二本质相同。

　　英语二大作文范文：

　　Recent years have witnessed an increase in people’s expenses on Spring Festival. Of all the expenses, money spent on various gifts is at the top of the list, accounting for about 40%. By comparison, those on food and traffic occupy 20% respectively. (套用小黄书26页句型)

　　There seem to be two elements involved in this phenomenon that people spend more on gifts than on other parts. To begin with, sometimes, the real position of gifts in our mind has less to do with its utility than its symbolic value, which represents our kindness to our friends and relatives. A good case in point now is a notable movie called ”Da Wan” or ”Big Shot’s Funeral”, directed by Xiaogang, Feng, which spreads a well-knownview------gifts are indispensable in interaction with others. Meanwhile, externally, our society is sparing no efforts to produce a brand-new concept that one’s social status is associated tightly with the gifts we send to others, which can also show his or her property.(改写小黄书78页观点)

　　To sum up, this trend is likely to continue for quite a long time in the future. Firmly, I believe that it is advisable for departments concerned to lay down strict rules and regulations so that we can put the situation under proper control. (改写小黄书24页结尾句型)

　　英语一小作文:

　　You are going to host a club reading session. Write an email of about 100 words recommending a book to the club members.

　　You should state reasons for your recommendation.

　　Dear friends,

　　As one of the members of the club, I have just finished reading Harry Porter,one of the most popular books in the world. Deeply touched, I am writing this letter to recommend the novel to share my feelings with you.

　　First of all, it is an interesting book that can spark your imagination. As is known to all, due to the problem with present educational system, most of us are used to reciting dead knowledge from books or professors while the ability to imagine proves of greater importance for the youngsters if they are to survive and thrive in society. Another reason is that, though imagined, the stories vividly described in the book are really thought-provoking.

　　Hopefully, all of us will benefit from it.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　英语二小作文:

　　Suppose your university is going to host a summer camp for high school students. Write a notice to

　　1) Briefly introduce the camp activities, and

　　2) Call for volunteers.

　　You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET

　　• Volunteers wanted.

　　Volunteers are needed for the summer camp to be held on our campus in early July. The camp is meant to help lend participants a competitive edge over others so that they can better face challenges in the future.

　　Basic requirements are familiarity with the theme of the camp. Other requirements include interpersonal communication ability, familiarity with our university and the city in terms of their history, proper manners and sense of responsibility.Priority and preference will be given to those experienced, either in organizing camps or similar activities.

　　Call 123456 or send messages to 123456@abc for application and information of the interview. Inquiries and encouraged but visits declined.

　　• ABC University

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