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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改(74)

2012-07-16 00:00:00来源:网络
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考研英语待批改作文:

Dear sir or madam,

I’m writing to you in order to apply for the assistant lawyer in you law office. I got the news from your website and I think I’m the best one for this job.

I’m confident for the job. First, I graduated last year from Southwest University of Political Science and Law. With two bachelor’s degrees in both English and law, I’m sure I can communicate in English and deal with the overseas cases. Second, as a member of Student Union, I spent a lot of time in solving defferent problems with many tough people. These experience make me good at communicate. Third, in order to rich my experience, I took some part-time jobs after class.

考研英语作文批改点评如下:

My resume will send to you in this letter and I’m waiting for your reply. Thank you for reading .

Dear sir or madamSir or Madam,
I’m writing to you in order to apply for the assistant lawyer in you(用所有格yourlaw office. I got the news from your website and I think I’m the best(避免出现这种语气的词,要谦虚)one for this job.
I’m confident for the job. First, I graduated last year from Southwest University of Political Science and Law. With two bachelor’s degrees in both English and law, I’m sure I can communicate in English and deal with the overseas cases. Second, as a member of Student Union, I spent a lot of time in solving defferent(拼写错误) problems with many tough people. These experience make me good at communicate(介词后用名词或动名词). Third, in order to rich my experience, I took some part-time jobs after class.
My resume will send(应该是被发送,用被动语态) to you in this letter and I’m waiting for your reply. Thank you for reading .
点评:7分
最后一段还有提升的空间。

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