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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改(605)

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It is vividly depicted that two tourists are cruising on the lake and enjoying the nice prospect of it on a small boat while throwing out the leftovers casually into the lake.Regretfully,there are a great deal of rubbish floating on the lake,such as plastic containers,fish-bones,banana skin,watermelon rind,empty bottles,tins,food wrappings,and so on.All of these wastes have exerted an terrible influence on the pleasant scene.

Though exaggerate a little,the cartoon illuminates a serious fact that excessively exploitation has already committed a too heavy burden to the nature.As is known to all,the ecological system can renew several bugs to keep balance.But if going beyond the limit,it must be in ruins and no longer recover as before.Numerous examples can be given,but this will suffice.Jade Dragon Snow Mountain is famous of its splendid sceneries.As too many visitors flood in,the ice caps come to melt gradually.Our descendants will probably never have a taste of how magnificent it was in the future.Although the tourism can render the development of economy accelerating,we should not omit its negative effects on environment.

In my opinion,tourism could be conserved as it indeed shore up our economy.Nevertheless,economic development should not be achieved at the cost of our environment's "health".It is high time that we cultivated citizen's sense to rectify wrongs by taking environmental protection into consideration.Only in this way can we leave a beautiful nature to our offsprings.

考研英语作文批改点评如下:

It is vividly depicted that two tourists are cruising on the lake and enjoying the nice prospect of it on a small boat while throwing out the leftovers casually into the lake. Regretfully, there are a great deal of rubbish floating on the lake, such as plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, empty bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on. All of these wastes have exerted an(用aterrible influence on the pleasant scene.
Though exaggerate(这里不能用动词原形,用-ing形式) a little, the cartoon illuminates a serious fact that excessively exploitation has already committed a too heavy burden to the nature. As is known to all, the ecological system can renew several bugs to keep balance. But if going beyond the limit, it must be in ruins and no longer recover as before. Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. Jade Dragon Snow Mountain is famous of its splendid sceneries. As too many visitors flood in, the ice caps come to melt gradually(更多的是因为气候变暖). Our descendants will probably never have a taste of how magnificent it was in the future. Although the tourism can render the development of economy accelerating, we should not omit its negative effects on environment.
In my opinion, tourism could be conserved as it indeed shore(应该用第三人称单数形式) up our economy. Nevertheless, economic development should not be achieved at the cost of our environment's "health". It is high time that we cultivated citizen's sense to rectify wrongs by taking environmental protection into consideration. Only in this way can we leave a beautiful nature to our offsprings(这个词的复数是它本身).
点评:11
字数不要超多太多。这篇作文的主题是旅游与环保,第二段前半部分与题目联系不紧密。

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