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2014考研英语作文评分标准及高分范文赏析

2013-12-14 09:03:46来源:新东方论坛

  高分范文

  Dear Bob,

  I am writing to express my apology to you. Several days ago,I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately,after I came back from Canada,I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary,I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.

  Once again,I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apologies.

  Sincerely yours,

  ZhangWei

  (2008年范文)

  It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon, but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life. Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society. From departments of government to common shopping centers, many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers. (范文)

  三、一般评分标准

  第五档:A节 (9-10分)B节 (17-20分)

  很好地完成了试题规定的任务;

  包含所有内容要点;

  使用丰富的语法结构和词汇;

  语言自然流畅,语法错误极少;

  有效地采用了多种衔接手法,文字连贯,层次清晰;

  格式与语域恰当、贴切。

  对目标读者完全产生了预期的效果。

  第四档:A节 (7-8分)B节(13-16分)

  较好地完成了试题规定的任务。

  包含所有内容要点,允许漏掉1、2个次重点;

  使用较丰富的语法结构和词汇;

  语言基本准确,只有在试图使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇时才有个别错误;

  采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰,组织较严密;

  格式与语域较恰当。

  对目标读者产生了预期的效果。

  第三档: A节 (5-6分)B节 (9-12分)

  基本完成了试题规定的任务。

  虽漏掉一些内容,但包含多数内容要点;

  应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的需求;

  有一些语法及词汇错误,但不影响理解;

  采用了简单的衔接手法,内容较连贯,层次较清晰;

  格式和语域基本合理。

  对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果。

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