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2014-01-24 18:00:23来源:网络

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Thisis a touching picture. Thirty years ago, a young mother held the little hand ofher daughter; now, her grown-up daughter in turn holds her who becomes wizenedand somewhat crooked. The picture surfaces a belief shared by all Chinese thatthe family love never grows old.

Sinceancient times, the family love has been considered to tower above all otherrelationships, no matter how close they appear. In fact, the society aboundswith such stories as that Chenxiang defied the overwhelming Jade Army in orderto save his mother and that Kong Fansen knelt and sobbed before his old motherevery time he had to leave for official affairs. These impressive stories,imaginary or real, highlight that the family love means everything to Chinese.

Forus college students, our parents have been supporting us whole-heartedly sincewe were born. Now they are growing old; some day in the future, they might notbe able to look after themselves. But the family love never grows old. So whenthe day comes, we must undertake the very responsibility to attend them,whether we are busy or rich.

点评:

这幅漫画满满的正能量,传递人间真情。根据作文提示,考生需要描述漫画,指出寓意并给出自己的看法。所以一般写法是分为三部分,分别应对题目要求。此篇范文的首段包含有对漫画的描述及指出漫画所揭示的中国传统观念——亲情至上。中间段则对亲情至上进行针对性的分析。笔者举了两个例子,一为神话故事沉香救母,二为现实典范孔繁森临行跪母。一个虚拟、一个现实、两个故事完美阐述亲情不随时空而改变,符合漫画寓意。最后一段的亮点在于联系现实。毕竟考生都是大学生,大学生在父母二十年的照顾下健康成长,这是亲情,所以当他们的父母老到生活不能自理时,大学生应该义无反顾地陪在父母身边,照顾父母,这才是至高无上的亲情。

语言方面,考生无需刻意制造亮点,遣词造句做到精准即可。这一点和平时积累密不可分。笔者时常阅读国外原著,所以喜欢用比喻和拟人等修辞手法对文章进行润色,比如说首段的surface,中间段的toweraboundhighlight。注意,没有所谓“亮点”词汇的文章并非一定无法获得高分。笔者还是强调一点,不用使用自己无法掌握的词汇。换句话说,在自己能力范围内进行遣词造句方是上上之策。

【注:范文来自朱伟老师、杨力老师】


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